From: George Erickson


Hi Bob, i finally got a look at your website, which is very nicely done, and, in general, impressed me. I would suggest 2 things, however. Because you repeatedly use the word "wrong" early on in the site (in your outline) you might want to define what you mean by wrong in one of the opening paragraphs. You come close in the section on truth, but "wrong" carries slightly different meaning: A statement can be wrong because it goes against the facts - an action can be wrong because the result is unnecessarily or excessively harmful. All in all it's a very nice looking presentation. George Erickson

George,

Thanks for the comments. I'm always interested in fixing anything that may lead to a misunderstanding, so I'll check this out and see what I can do to improve it.

Bob

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